this follows a clear structure and the topic is evident. You need to proof read: what do you mean by youth culture and GOSH? Also you need to be clearer on logistical issues (getting organised!) and much clearer on the content of the two linked articles.
this follows a clear structure and the topic is evident. You need to proof read: what do you mean by youth culture and GOSH? Also you need to be clearer on logistical issues (getting organised!) and much clearer on the content of the two linked articles.
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